Aug 15, 2007

My ONE SHOT.

[One Shot] Smile for me, will you?

Inspired by David Choi: That Girl and I won’t smile.


I know this is really weird but yes, my boyfriend, David, he doesn’t smile.

Ever since we coupled up, or ever since I knew him, he doesn’t smile.

The same line I used over and over again, Will you smile, for me?

He won’t. And I wonder why.


David why don’t you smile? I’ll ask him. “Because the world will be a demented place” he

answered bluntly every time. Or he would say, “I don’t need to prove anything with my smile”



You know what’s weirder? I wished for him to smile.

Be it 11:11, or my birthdays, or Christmas. I wished for him to smile.


It’s been 3 years. But I still haven’t seen him smile.

I wonder now. Is it so hard for him to smile?


Today is my birthday.

I guess this year my wish still stays the same.


David just called me. He’s bringing me somewhere to celebrate.

It’s 5:01pm. He came and we went in his car.“Where are we going?” I asked.

“You will know” is all he answered.


It was somewhere near the mountain areas, where you can see the city from the top.

We sat on the hood, without a word. It’s 6:30pm. The sun just set. It was beautiful.

“You told me you’ve always wanted to watch the sun set” he said.

I smiled at him. “That’s not I wished for every time, but thank you. It’s beautiful” I told him.


He looked away. “I know, I’m sorry,” he said softly.

I gave him a bear hug. “It’s okay” I tried my best to cheer him up although I felt sad inside.

“You always ask me to smile, but you never ask why I never smile” he said.

I looked into his eyes. I nodded. Yes, I never ask him why he doesn’t smile. I wonder why?


We never spoke a word that night until I reached home.


Sigh. My wish didn’t come true.

Bleep. I just received a message. From David. “Hey look out the window


I went out to my balcony, and saw David on his car. Yes, on his car.

“What are you doing?” I asked him.

He didn’t say anything but he put his finger on his lips.

At the side laid some huge flash cards.


He held it in his hands, and showed it one by one to me.




I smiled at him. “Thanks” I shouted.


I chuckled. “I love you lots too” I grinned. I cannot believe he’s doing this!



“Huh?” I stared at him.





That touched my heart. Tears welled up my eyes.

I was speechless.


I looked away, trying to hide my smile. God! This is so embarrassing


I laughed. “What if I said no? Have you prepared a flash card for that?” I playfully said.



He came down from his car, and climbed up to my balcony.

“Hey” he said, wiping off my tears. I looked into his eyes.

We kissed. The sweetest kiss I’ve ever had.

We pulled out from each other’s embrace.

“Hey, what’s that?” he pointed behind me and I turned.

Nothing. He was just… I turned back to him. And I cried. Again.

He smiled at me. Okay, he smiled at me.

“You’re smiling at me!” I hugged him.

He grabbed my hands and looked into my eyes again.

“No, I was smiling for you” he said.

I got my wish after all.


Author's note: Yes, you might be thinking it's lame or whatever. Well, this is part of my ranting actually. Yes, I write. And this is the first one I posted on my blog. Yes, it might be lame to you. I like it, though. Haha. You must be thinking (well, if you know me)- I can come up with lame, love stories like this? But really, I don't. Usually someone will end up dying or something. So, this is what I have to say. Leave a comment or something. So that I can improve on my writing. Yes, I write. :p



1 spoken:

laleche

“You’re smiling at me!” I hugged him.

He grabbed my hands and looked into my eyes again.

“No, I was smiling for you” he said.

I got my wish after all.

AAAAA!!! COMELLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like this one!!!!! :)

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